The picture doesn't seem to be working. Is there another link you can use??

I can see the pic fine.

Nice drawing.
Did she just bit the lips?

I would recommend anything but imgur. The reason why is that it's blacklisted on certain people's filter.

I see. I wasn't aware of that. I used to use tinypic, but they tend to delete images after a while. Would PRTSCR.net work?

For some reason photovucket and deviant art works. But I'm not aware of any other image host.

So I noticed your characters' bodies tend to look very similar. Their arms and hands are a little on the short and thick side.

I wouldn't worry too much about emphasizing any muscles. But I also say their might be just too much color Inn this one page, and even with that much color, your characters do not appear distinct enough.


So perhaps choose a specific color palette for each character before hand so people can recognize them easier. And speaking of color, try not to color in too harshly. Just color in soft and add layers if you are using color pencils.

It looks great in my opinion. But I also thought it was some form of drawing based on legend of zelda for some reason.

The pointy ears, blonde hair, and green shirt no doubt helped play a role in that confusion.

Hopefully I'll get up a muse and have something else to share with you all by the end of the week.

Also the purple princess dress and blonde elf too.  But I'll keep a look out for more.