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Re: Broken
« on: August 19, 2018, 06:15:14 am »
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i can tell this was a little older and you are more capable now than in the past

It's actually a month old. I went through a period of time where I kind of abandoned my artwork, so I'm a bit worse than I was in the past.

You're right about the masks, they were way too detailed and don't really look like masks. It wasn't my intention and I wanted them to be obvious and apparent.

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It was hard for me to relate to him just by having his heart broken for seeing someone he didn't know with someone else

They actually got into a relationship and knew each other for a good while before she broke his heart. Maybe it didn't come across as such because of the limited number of pages.

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Do you intend on remaking this? I think it would leave aa stronger impact if you did. Its definitely a good for 10-page manga competition.

I might remake it in the future but I'm really not that fond of it. I kind of saw it differently in my head and I wasn't able to translate it onto paper in a satisfying way. I'm currently working on "Reverse" so we'll see what happens.

Thanks for the critiques, much appreciated.

 

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