The thought process: Jeremy brings up being a compulsive reader but he never showed this trait. I added him reading books to scenes where he is idling in order to make this more obvious. I also introduced a new opening to chapter 1 as an eye grabber, and to showcase his more chivalrous tendencies towards women. I also highlighted the revised text so that you don't have to read through the whole thing just to find small changes and you can see the context of why something needed to change there.
Lumaria would like to see this finished, so I'm going to work on this instead of Blade Regalia until it's finished. And then I'll go back to it.