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Author Topic: You're Not Real  (Read 1752 times)

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Re: You're Not Real
« on: June 15, 2017, 07:26:05 pm »
Read both chapters. Seems interesting concept. But it always seems like you wrote the most HATABLE characters.

The main character is just not enjoyable or redeemable in anyway. His friends are just background characters. The things he does make me hate him instantly. He is a sociopath.

You at least have a stronger idea of what you're doing here. Unless you suddenly reveal something really crazy and obscure that completely destroys what you built up.

But I'll save judgement when you finish a story.
« Last Edit: June 15, 2017, 09:31:59 pm by Lumaria »

 

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