i can tell this was a little older and you are more capable now than in the past

It's actually a month old. I went through a period of time where I kind of abandoned my artwork, so I'm a bit worse than I was in the past.

You're right about the masks, they were way too detailed and don't really look like masks. It wasn't my intention and I wanted them to be obvious and apparent.

It was hard for me to relate to him just by having his heart broken for seeing someone he didn't know with someone else

They actually got into a relationship and knew each other for a good while before she broke his heart. Maybe it didn't come across as such because of the limited number of pages.

Do you intend on remaking this? I think it would leave aa stronger impact if you did. Its definitely a good for 10-page manga competition.

I might remake it in the future but I'm really not that fond of it. I kind of saw it differently in my head and I wasn't able to translate it onto paper in a satisfying way. I'm currently working on "Reverse" so we'll see what happens.

Thanks for the critiques, much appreciated.