I completely agree that the hands need more refining and to look more feminie like. I also think extending the sleeves and making them fingerless gloves would make the design more interesting. I think what I have now is very basic and it's something i'd use as an under sketch when i add in additional details.

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Her left or our left? Granted that i drew the deltoid muscle on the left side of the picture  a bit farther out than what i intended to, I think the tilt on her collarbone combined with the t****zius muscle  looks proper. If possible, I'd like to see your correction on top of my drawing for clarification.

... being self-taught really sucks at times . I don't even know the name of each muscles you've mentioned because I skipped knowing them ...

Anyways , I intended to avoid doing any sort of favor sketches simply because I'm doing one-shots as a part-time work (one or two every month) & I need to keep that workflow flowing .

So as to not be inconsiderate & thoughtless , I'll try to do so at my utmost best (I hardly make these kinds of things due to the nature of my ways in mastering art) whenever I had the time , but don't hold me on that promise though as I also had another one that I didn't get to it for months ...

EDIT : It seems that you've spotted one of the flaws on your own , so good one . If you ask me what made your anatomy looked wonky , it has something to do with the execution of it done with foreshortening & at a  slightly dynamic angle , particularly how it doesn't scale & placed right .

I'm going to be honest. The only thing that was done free hand by me was the possible logos and coloring.


Everything else I mostly traced. such as hoodie, pants, even tried to emulate Lumarias style. After that, Lumaria gave me some help ideas. So one of the biggest changes was to make her design asymmetrical. So I Gave her different bangs, and turned her pants into half-shorts, half-pants. And as last minute I gave her a side mini pack.

Logos are just something I do for fun. I'm trying to get into graphic designs for logos. But I still not good at free hand.  They look more comic book like. I ended up disguising it my making it look intentional.

Edit: OK I'm crazy nervous. The camera and the fact I drew it on pen makes it look better than what it looks like in real life. But please be relentless as possible.

I was thinking either green eyes or yellow eyes. But now that you said it, mix of both would be great. One green, one yellow.

Your right about the blue though. I originally wanted colors from Tron.

I was hoping footwear would not be brought up. I'm horrible at drawing shoes and didn't find a good choice that matched the overall style.

You make a good point about the vizor and headphones. That night be one too any accessories. But that's about it.

That looks really great. Thats a good option too.

I used Photoshop.

Yeah, School uniform is easy to remember, often related to anime as well.