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Author Topic: The story Loa will ride me.  (Read 824 times)

Crackhead Johny

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The story Loa will ride me.
« on: May 12, 2017, 12:51:22 am »
The story Loa has been attacking me every night for the last week.

I can't sleep.
This time it demands 1st person perspective and I do not like that. 3rd person you get to tell the tale. 1st person you have to live the tale and this story if how humanity dies.
I like when I get many characters and they ride me around.

I was going to get rocked and watch the Stein's Gate movie tomorrow night. Now if I drink a 1.75.. I will write.

So Voodoo: do you let the Lao ride you even if you have other plans*?

*keep in mind this might let you final;y get some sleep. 

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Re: The story Loa will ride me.
« Reply #1 on: May 13, 2017, 03:36:51 am »
What's this story you are working on?

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Re: The story Loa will ride me.
« Reply #2 on: May 14, 2017, 04:04:03 am »
It seems like post apocalyptic alien invasion crap. Maybe 15 pages.

The Loa says it will be great. I have a real book to work on, I do not need this.

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Re: The story Loa will ride me.
« Reply #3 on: May 14, 2017, 06:28:53 pm »
Well I hope it works out. If you ever want to share a story I'm sure we would like to help.

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Re: The story Loa will ride me.
« Reply #4 on: May 14, 2017, 11:45:00 pm »
Yeah.. I may have to get it out of my system.
Last story was about Johnny Johnny BK. The baby killer.
Tthe Loa has not let that one go over ~18 months so I may have to write that one also. A baby killer as the good guy..

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Re: The story Loa will ride me.
« Reply #5 on: May 15, 2017, 01:57:31 am »
That sounds interesting. I'm not sure if you ever shared any details before so I'm a little lost

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Re: The story Loa will ride me.
« Reply #6 on: May 22, 2017, 07:35:37 pm »
The story Loa has been attacking me every night for the last week.

I can't sleep.
This time it demands 1st person perspective and I do not like that. 3rd person you get to tell the tale. 1st person you have to live the tale and this story if how humanity dies.
I like when I get many characters and they ride me around.

I was going to get rocked and watch the Stein's Gate movie tomorrow night. Now if I drink a 1.75.. I will write.

So Voodoo: do you let the Lao ride you even if you have other plans*?

*keep in mind this might let you final;y get some sleep.

Well I try not to worry about which perspective I prefer but which one the story needs. If the story demands 1st person than you can try it out. Does it involve multiple moan characters? I'm not sure what kind of story you are writing so I'm not much help

 

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